Persuasive writing-Brushing Teeth.

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Brushing teeth

Teeth are important for chewing our food.

We need to look after them.
So I think we should brush our teeth every day.
Firstly I think we should brush our teeth
every day so that we don’t get
cavities and holes in our teeth.
Germs give us holes and cavities.
So we need to always brush our teeth
so we can brush the bugs away.
Secondly I think we should brush our
teeth every day because if you don’t
the little bugs will come in your mouth and eat
the remaining food in your mouth.
So if you brush your teeth every day
they don’t eat and eat at your teeth.
Thirdly I think we should brush our teeth
every day so you don’t get sore teeth
because if you get sore teeth
that means you have not been
looking after your teeth.
So that’s why I think we should brush our teeth every day.